Initial Double Page Spread Audience Feedback

After initially completing my magazine's double page spread, I decided to ask for feedback in order to progress and find ways to develop my media products. Using survey monkey, I also requested constructive comments that I could work from to improve my work.

From these responses I have decided to return to my initial double page spread and experiment with the aspect of the swirl, as it has shown to be a problem before on my front cover where people mistook it for a tattoo. In this case I will try different effects to brighten or lessen the darkness of the black as suggested. I am happy that the feedback I received was all positive and generally people believed it would work well as a music magazine. Furthermore, I received few ideas of change, suggesting there is little I need to do to complete this contents page and I am confident it would appeal to my chosen audiences within the genre of pop/rock.